[livejournal.com profile] leo_palooza giftfic for <lj site="livejournal.com" user="groolove

Dec. 23rd, 2010 08:02 am
nursedarry: (Xams-Peace)
[personal profile] nursedarry
To: [livejournal.com profile] groolover
Gift: Drabble
Rating: G (what?!)
Word Count: 503
Summary: Telling his parents he’s in love should be easy, right?
Author's notes: To one of the brightest, most hard-working women in fandom. Thank you for all you’ve done for me both virtually and in RL. Huge ♥ and Happy Christmas!




“You shouldn’t be here in this depressing place.”

“I know, but I needed you to know that I’m all right.”

“We do.”

“Really?”

“Of course we’re happy to see you, but at what cost? You could be in danger; people hold grudges and have long memories.”

“This is important. I need you to know about…my life now.”

“Has something changed?”

“Yes. And you might…not approve of everything…I’m doing now.” He pulled his scarf closer around himself. It was very cold.

“You’re back at school?”

“Yes.”

“It’s better now? You’re learning?”

“Yes. I hadn’t realised how much I missed it.” He almost laughed at the thought and wondered if his father would approve. After all, it was questionable as to how much actual knowledge his father had come away with from his tenure at Hogwarts.

“You’re in love, aren’t you?” his mother said, chasing all thoughts of academia away. He had always thought she was the more intuitive of his parents.

“Yes, I am.”

“Who is she?” his father asked.

He paused, unsure of how to continue.

“Someone we might not approve of, eh?”

“Quiet,” his mother interrupted again. She looked at her son. “As if that really matters. It’s not a she, is it, sweetie?”

“No.”

“Does he love you?”

“Yes, I think so.”

There was a heavy silence.

“Darling, our son is in love; it’s all right to be happy.”

“I am happy. I just don’t want to see him get…”

“Hurt? I won’t be. He’s…he can’t hurt me after all we’ve been through.”

“You’ve known him long?”

“Since first year.”

“Do we know his parents? His family?”

“You could say that.”

There was another very long pause. He looked at the ground.

“It’s someone from the other side, isn’t it?” His mother was making this easier for him, even if his father wasn’t.

“…yes.”

“I’m not sure I—”

“Be quiet. Your son is happy and in love. You remember how that feels, don’t you?”

“I remember.” His father kissed his mother’s hand.

“Tell us more, sweetie. Is he as handsome as you? Is he nice or difficult or as worried for you as we sometimes are?”

“He’s all of those things. He’s clever, he’s beautiful, he’s…sorry.”

“That’s good, then.” His mother smiled. Her son smiled back.

The next long pause was less uncomfortable.

“Will you ever be able to leave here?” he asked, glancing around the place. It looked exactly the same as when he’d visited the last time.

“Of course we will,” his mother promised. “But we cherish your visits.”

“Me too.” He wrapped his cloak about him more tightly. “I better go,” he said. “I just wanted you to know I was okay.”

He turned and took a step away, his shoes crunching in the snow.

“Harry?” his mother called.

“Yes?”

“You’ll bring him with you next time, won’t you?”

Harry couldn’t help it, he smiled. And tried to imagine the conversation Draco was now having with his parents in a cold Azkaban cell.

“I’ll try.”


The End
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Date: 2010-12-23 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you. I can't always carry it off, but I give it a good try once and again :D

EDT: Wait - wrong icon!
Edited Date: 2010-12-23 06:41 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2010-12-23 08:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
I loved this!

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you, BB!

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Date: 2010-12-23 08:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kitty_fic
Oh, wow! Not what I expected! But Brilliant! I loved this! <3

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Date: 2010-12-23 01:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] delphipsmith
*snickers* at your icon :D

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Date: 2010-12-23 09:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kjp-013.livejournal.com
Oh wow. That was amazing!

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! It's written for an amazing lady.

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Date: 2010-12-23 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
*sniffles* So much ♥ for this ficlet!

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Awww. *hands you tissue* Thank you!

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Date: 2010-12-23 09:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nenne.livejournal.com
Awww. *blinks really fast* That was an unexpected ending and the whole story was beautifully done.

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Ha! My fiendish plan worked then. Thank you for the nice comment :)

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Date: 2010-12-23 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com
Oh that was just beautiful, I thought for a moment it was Draco talking to his parents, but this way makes it more the poignant and I hope Harry takes Draco to see his parents sometime
Just lovely :)

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
I'm sure they do come visit together. At least I like to think so.

*stares at your icon*

*stares some more*

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Date: 2010-12-23 11:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nimielle.livejournal.com
Oh my GOD! You completely fooled me! I thought it was Draco talking to his parents who'd died during the war or something.

This was lovely and bittersweet and everything it should have been! ♥ I loved how perfceptive his mother was and just everything about this, the recepient is very lucky!

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you for such an awesome comment! ♥

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Date: 2010-12-23 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] subtlefire.livejournal.com
This was so good! :)

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Cheers, m'dear! *smooches*

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Date: 2010-12-23 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brissygirl.livejournal.com
You confused me for a minute at the end, but you told the story beautifully. I think it needs a companion piece of Draco talking to his parents. *nods*

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Hee hee - go on, you! And wonderful icon, m'dear!

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Date: 2010-12-23 01:14 pm (UTC)
delphipsmith: (NoSparkle)
From: [personal profile] delphipsmith
Awwww. How sweet is that? A nice little piece of holiday candy!

Edit: Oh and yeah, I totally thought it was Draco until the name dropped -- well done :)
Edited Date: 2010-12-23 01:16 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thanks muchly, m'dear! *smooches*

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Date: 2010-12-23 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veritas03.livejournal.com
Oh! I thought it was Draco talking to his parents (although the thing about what his father might have learned during his tenure at Hogwarts gave me pause - until I got to the end and realized it was James and not Lucius!)! That was incredibly cool. So of course I had to go back and re-read it knowing it was Harry and his parents. SOOOOO good!!!

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Date: 2010-12-23 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Awww... thank you so much for a lovely comment.

That icon just hypnotises me everytime I see it!

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Date: 2010-12-23 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] groolover.livejournal.com
That is SO CLEVER. And so beautifully written. And so moving, and I love every word of it. Of course I, too, thought it was Draco until the end, and had to immediately go back and re-read it from a different perspective. And then I had to read it again to marvel at how cleverly everything was written so that it worked perfectly for both possible protagonists.

I have a major thing I *must* do tonight, and I told myself I'd better not even look at LJ until it was done. But I'm very glad I did, because now I'm totally inspired! Thank you so much!

And now it's been a few minutes since I read it, so I'd better go and read it again because I love it so :-)

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Date: 2010-12-23 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Awww, thank you!!! I wasn't sure you were going to like it. *was nervous*

I was standing in the queue for DH1 when I got the email with your name as my recip and let out the most girly SQUEE (people would have moved away from me except I was barricaded between [livejournal.com profile] accioscar and [livejournal.com profile] cassie_black12.

I was obviously inspired by the scene in Godrick's Hollow, but didn't want to make it too sappy, so I thought shortly post-war would be a good point of reference for this.

Believe it or not, I tried to make it longer, but there just didn't seem to be any need for it, so I left them to rest in peace.

So glad your happy with it and so glad I know you!

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Date: 2010-12-23 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilyginny27.livejournal.com
What a surprise! I kept vacillating back and forth with whether it was Draco or Scorpius saying they were in love with a Potter, but to have it be HARRY? Woah. Totally got me. Loved it! :D

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Date: 2010-12-23 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Scorpius - I hadn't considered that, but that's brilliant. Mmmmm...Scorpius. ♥ Thank you for the lovely comment, BB!

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Date: 2010-12-23 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtsbbsps-dk.livejournal.com
Just read it twice.

*FLAILS*

*glomps you*

Hope the kids weren't too cranky about going to bed ;D

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Date: 2010-12-24 10:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
LOL! No, they were good - but cranky this morning. Great to talk to you, BB!

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Date: 2010-12-23 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Wow, I thought it was Draco at first! Very clever! And very beautiful, too.

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Date: 2010-12-24 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you very much for reading and commenting! It means a lot to me that you like it!

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Date: 2010-12-24 01:54 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] flamingolady.livejournal.com
This was beautiful! I really thought it was Draco talking to Lucius and Narcissa, but having it be Harry was just perfect. I loved it. :) So clever.

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Date: 2010-12-24 10:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Hee hee... that was the dastardly plan...I wanted it to be as ambiguous as possible. Thank you so much for the lovely comment :D

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Date: 2010-12-24 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tigersilver.livejournal.com
Fabulous, fabulous TWIST! This is just one of the many reasons why I leap on a nursedarry fic the moment I see it, just like, ahem, a...well, a Tiger:>

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Date: 2010-12-24 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
LOLOL! Well, prepare to leap tomorrow - I may have a few stocking stuffers floating around... :D

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Date: 2010-12-24 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] besamislabios
This was so beautiful and touching. *loves*

Happy Holidays! *big hugs*

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Date: 2010-12-24 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luna-lundgren.livejournal.com
I liked it a lot, a little confusing though. How is Harry talking to his parents, and I didn't really get at first which one was talking, harry or draco. nice fic, though. :D merry christmas! or happy holidays, whatever, i'm not picky. :)

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Date: 2010-12-24 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Hee hee - love your icon :) I figured since Harry could hear/see his parents in a couple of instances (like in the graveyard at the end of GoF), I'd take a little poetic lisence and let him do it again.

I wanted it to be ambiguous, so I guess that worked. Happy Hols to you too!

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Date: 2010-12-25 10:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] moonlitdark.livejournal.com
What a lovely twist! Very well done! ♥

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Date: 2010-12-26 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dark0feenix.livejournal.com
Awwww, lovely! I thought almost until the end it was Draco talking to his parents but that was the whole point, wasn't it? :) Funny how the parallel conversation in Azkaban might go pretty much the same way. :)

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Date: 2010-12-26 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you! Oddly enough, I'd never considered writing that conversation, but I'd love to have been a fly on the wall!

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Date: 2010-12-27 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cleo-jay.livejournal.com
Oooh, brilliant and sneaky!!! Just like you! :D I totally thought it was Draco at first! Very well done, darling - I loved it! ♥

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Date: 2010-12-27 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Hello you! You need to tell me what you want for Christmas! Did you get the pic I sent you? I LOVE MY SCARF! I wore it today - just to Sainsbury's but I was the most fashionable persone there :D

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Date: 2011-01-03 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vwalk.livejournal.com
OMG! This was so beautifully done. I finished it and then immediately read it again. I love how you maintained the anonymity of the speaker until the very end. I'm sure I'm not the only one who was sure we were seeing Draco talk to his parent. Finding out it was Harry was a very touching surprise.
I love this.
Bravo to you!

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Date: 2011-01-03 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you very much for the wonderful comment! I'm glad it moved you. Occassionally I do stray from the fluff for something a little more...poignant, and I'm glad this moved you.
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