[livejournal.com profile] leo_palooza giftfic for <lj site="livejournal.com" user="groolove

Dec. 23rd, 2010 08:02 am
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To: [livejournal.com profile] groolover
Gift: Drabble
Rating: G (what?!)
Word Count: 503
Summary: Telling his parents he’s in love should be easy, right?
Author's notes: To one of the brightest, most hard-working women in fandom. Thank you for all you’ve done for me both virtually and in RL. Huge ♥ and Happy Christmas!




“You shouldn’t be here in this depressing place.”

“I know, but I needed you to know that I’m all right.”

“We do.”

“Really?”

“Of course we’re happy to see you, but at what cost? You could be in danger; people hold grudges and have long memories.”

“This is important. I need you to know about…my life now.”

“Has something changed?”

“Yes. And you might…not approve of everything…I’m doing now.” He pulled his scarf closer around himself. It was very cold.

“You’re back at school?”

“Yes.”

“It’s better now? You’re learning?”

“Yes. I hadn’t realised how much I missed it.” He almost laughed at the thought and wondered if his father would approve. After all, it was questionable as to how much actual knowledge his father had come away with from his tenure at Hogwarts.

“You’re in love, aren’t you?” his mother said, chasing all thoughts of academia away. He had always thought she was the more intuitive of his parents.

“Yes, I am.”

“Who is she?” his father asked.

He paused, unsure of how to continue.

“Someone we might not approve of, eh?”

“Quiet,” his mother interrupted again. She looked at her son. “As if that really matters. It’s not a she, is it, sweetie?”

“No.”

“Does he love you?”

“Yes, I think so.”

There was a heavy silence.

“Darling, our son is in love; it’s all right to be happy.”

“I am happy. I just don’t want to see him get…”

“Hurt? I won’t be. He’s…he can’t hurt me after all we’ve been through.”

“You’ve known him long?”

“Since first year.”

“Do we know his parents? His family?”

“You could say that.”

There was another very long pause. He looked at the ground.

“It’s someone from the other side, isn’t it?” His mother was making this easier for him, even if his father wasn’t.

“…yes.”

“I’m not sure I—”

“Be quiet. Your son is happy and in love. You remember how that feels, don’t you?”

“I remember.” His father kissed his mother’s hand.

“Tell us more, sweetie. Is he as handsome as you? Is he nice or difficult or as worried for you as we sometimes are?”

“He’s all of those things. He’s clever, he’s beautiful, he’s…sorry.”

“That’s good, then.” His mother smiled. Her son smiled back.

The next long pause was less uncomfortable.

“Will you ever be able to leave here?” he asked, glancing around the place. It looked exactly the same as when he’d visited the last time.

“Of course we will,” his mother promised. “But we cherish your visits.”

“Me too.” He wrapped his cloak about him more tightly. “I better go,” he said. “I just wanted you to know I was okay.”

He turned and took a step away, his shoes crunching in the snow.

“Harry?” his mother called.

“Yes?”

“You’ll bring him with you next time, won’t you?”

Harry couldn’t help it, he smiled. And tried to imagine the conversation Draco was now having with his parents in a cold Azkaban cell.

“I’ll try.”


The End
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Bravo!

Date: 2011-01-03 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vwalk.livejournal.com
This was beautifully done. I love the way you kept the identity unknown until the end. I was certain we were seeing Draco with his parents. To find out that it was Harry and his parents was a heartbreaking, yet wonderful surprise.
I absolutely love this fic. I've already read it three times and I know I'll be reading it over and over.

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Date: 2011-01-04 11:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dirty-darella.livejournal.com
Aww, so sweet!
And what a twist at the end there. XD
Loved it!

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Date: 2011-01-06 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you for that. This was actually very easy to write, and I had Harry in mind for most of it until I realised it could have been either of them :D

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Date: 2011-01-10 05:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brinimc.livejournal.com
Ahh! A twist! Darm you, twists! Daaarn yooooou!

Actually I quite like that twist. It made it so much more interesting. :)

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Date: 2011-01-10 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
LOLOL! Thank you - she had put she liked scenes like this in her prompt, which just made this so fun.

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Date: 2011-08-23 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tabitha666.livejournal.com
This was really sad and lovely. Beautiful job.

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Date: 2011-08-24 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
I'd forgot about this - thank you so much! I loved writing it!

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Date: 2012-11-11 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lttlelola.livejournal.com
*gropes for a tissue*

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Date: 2012-11-11 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lttlelola.livejournal.com
you inspired me. maybe i'll do something i've been tossing around. *sighs* i have 4 years of fic to catch up on. catch up with my favorite authors first :)the two i wrote this week are all i'm writing till i'm caught up.

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Date: 2015-02-27 04:47 pm (UTC)
lordhellebore: (harry draco)
From: [personal profile] lordhellebore
You definitely had me fooled into thinking it was Draco talking to his parents, although a few times I was irritated (like, what, Lucius not having taken away much from Hogwarts? And Harry being sorry - for what? ;)

Great ficlet! :)

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Date: 2015-02-28 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yes, I was hoping that the reader might be a little confused and that the conversation could be one either boy was having with his parents.

re: Drabble

Date: 2015-02-27 09:57 pm (UTC)
vaysh: Potter? (a_Potter?)
From: [personal profile] vaysh
You totally had me fooled into believing this was Draco and the Malfoys (in Azkaban I assumed). The idea of this place, the Mirror of Erised, I think, to be there for Harry to talk to Lily and James, is wonderful.

Re: Drabble

Date: 2015-02-28 03:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Ha ha! My little deception worked. I always imagined him at their graves or looking into the mirror, either one would have worked, depending on the reader. :) X

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Date: 2015-02-28 12:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] capitu
Aww, so much love for Lily here! Loved it. :D

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Date: 2015-02-28 03:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
IKR? Mum's know these things. And are super-smart. Xx

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Date: 2015-03-01 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] divertazsc.livejournal.com
Came to read this because of the Anon Remix fic. You had me right up until the end believeing this was Draco talking to his parents. So intrigued with this POV with Harry and his parents ghosts? Spirits? Reflections in a mirror? Voices in his head? Voices behind the veil? So many possibilities.

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Date: 2015-03-09 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading and the lovely comment! I'd always imagined Harry standing in the graveyard in Godric's Hollow and talking to the headstones, but figured it could be anywhere/in any way :)

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Date: 2015-03-01 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blithelybonny.livejournal.com
This was so lovely and unexpected! But really, really beautiful. Oh, these boys :)

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Date: 2015-03-09 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Thank you very much for the lovely comment. I know, they break my heart sometimes...
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