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nursedarry ([personal profile] nursedarry) wrote2010-06-10 05:26 am
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Fic: H/D Was It Something I Said?

Title: Was It Something I Said?
Prompt: from [livejournal.com profile] perpetualmarble - Hot and heavy parseltongue action. Draco has a kink he had no idea about until he hears Harry speak in parseltongue, and Harry finds out! I would LOVE a dash of bondage (as in let's-tie-Draco-up-and-taunt-him-until-he-combusts!)
Rating/Word Count: R/2167
Author's Notes: What’s not to love about this prompt? I’m sorry — the boys wanted to be slow and smexy rather than fast and rough, but they got there in the end. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] delphipsmith and [livejournal.com profile] cassie_black12 for keeping me from throwing a hissy fit. Written for [livejournal.com profile] serpentinelion's Summer Kink Fest, 2010.




The fall had probably not looked that bad to the spectators, but to the players who’d taken a tumble on more than one occasion, it looked as bad as it turned out to be. Draco now languished in the hospital wing while the Skelegrow went to work on his broken collarbone and fractured ankle. The medicine had been revolting; he almost felt sorry for Potter for having been forced to drink twice as much in second year (as Madam Pomfrey had disclosed upon Draco’s declaration of disgust and refusal to finish his dose). And, as the school nurse reminded him, he at least was conscious to enjoy his visitors and their gifts of food and attention. Potter’s friends had had to sit at his bedside, speaking in low voices, as their comatose hero lay motionless and unheeding of the murmured sympathies and treacle tart.

Now, a week into the Christmas holiday, with Draco’s parents apologetically but happily visiting with relations on the Continent, Draco almost wished Potter were awake. He had already skimmed and discarded the books his parents had left him and was now desperate for company. If Potter woke up, they might even be able to continue the fight they’d been in the middle of when the Bludger had taken them both off their broomsticks.

Draco sighed and turned to look at the boy in the next bed. The unopened Christmas presents had been stashed away and the uneaten mince pies removed, leaving just the bedside lamp, an empty glass, and a jug of water on the table between their beds. And Potter’s glasses, which lay next to the jug, within easy reach should their owner need them.

Draco turned back to look at the last of his Christmas books, A History of Slytherin House. The large serpent on the cover reminded him of the snake Potter had spoken to during their now-infamous second year duel. How Draco had come away from that unscathed was still a mystery. Oh, he’d been in no danger of physical harm — Professor Snape wouldn’t have allowed that — but lucky for Draco, Finch-Fletchley had drawn everyone’s attention and he’d been able to escape into the crowd with no one noticing how aroused he’d become when Potter began speaking to the snake. Draco had been relatively new to wanking then, but the orgasm he’d had that night — safely hidden behind the drapes around his bed, shuttered together with not one, but two privacy spells, conjuring up the memory of those hissed words — was the best Draco had ever had until then. And he’d had none better since.

Such a profound influence was the experience that not long afterwards Draco finally admitted that the odd feelings he’d had for his Head of House might have indeed been a crush, if even Potter could make him feel that way. He had wondered why he’d felt nothing for the pretty girls at school, yet watching Marcus showering in the Quidditch locker room had made him blush. Draco had tested this theory three years later with Blaise, the next morning promising his reflection he’d never question his intuition again.

A good wank would help him sleep now, he decided, wondering if Madam Pomfrey would interrupt him with another visit to Potter’s side. She was less worried for Draco since he’d become his normal sneering self shortly after his admission.

“Potter,” he whispered to the supine figure in the bed beside him. “I want you to talk snake.” Unsurprisingly, Potter didn’t comply with the request. He just lay there. Unmoving. The realisation of the situation hit Draco then. There was a chance that Potter might never recover from the fall. He might remain comatose forever or even die without ever regaining consciousness. Madam Pomfrey had said as much to the Headmistress earlier (she’d thought Draco was asleep). A part of Draco thought that was just impossible: Potter couldn’t die. He had a destiny; he had important things to do, like killing Dark Lords and having a bunch of kids with another gormless Gryffindor. Or maybe he'd follow in the footsteps of his pseudo-godfather-wolf and become the next DADA instructor.

Surely, Harry Potter would never die from a simple bump on the head sustained during a Quidditch match. It was Madam Pomfrey’s opinion that there was nothing broken, no permanent damage that she could see, but she had told the headmaster that sometimes magic did funny things when a witch or wizard was unconscious too long. The school was to call in a specialist from St Mungo's if there was no improvement by the New Year.

“Don’t die, Potter,” Draco said softly into the darkness. “Who here would be so easy to wind up? Who could I taunt like I can taunt you, eh? You make it so easy, but I would miss it. Who would follow me around like you do? Who would I love to hate as much as I pretend to hate you?” This last was said without thinking, and his own words gave Draco pause. No, he didn’t hate Potter. What he felt now, after all the years of constant contact, was...different from hate. He couldn’t immediately identify the feeling but he knew he couldn’t let Potter go. Not now.

Draco tried to imagine a world without Potter. Certainly the Dark Lord would benefit, but would Draco? For five years, his days had been full of Potter-watching, waiting for the best time to insult or irritate him so as to have the greatest effect and provide the best possible return of attention. With Potter gone, who would provide him with a source for that? There’d be no match for him at Quidditch. There would be no one to sneer at through meals and classes. There’d be no chance of hearing the sound of Parseltongue -- unless he heard the Dark Lord speak it, but Draco hoped never to have that experience.

If Potter should die, I would have very little to do at the school besides go to class, he thought. There was no one he really fancied, so he kept telling himself. Aside from his one experience with Blaise in fifth year, Draco had not been with anyone sexually, so much of his time taken up by sport, school, and Potter.

What did that mean? Draco let his mind wander...to Quidditch, where he would either be playing against Potter, or watching him play, or looking for him in the stands, making sure Potter saw him catch the Snitch... Potions, where Draco would taunt Potter and the Weasel about their deplorable skills, where he’d flaunt his proficiency, never bested, except perhaps by Granger... Potter. Always he came back to Potter.

“Potter,” Draco turned back to the other boy. “Please, talk to me in snake.” Draco let his hand drift down his torso under his sheet where it came to rest on his hardening cock. The image of Potter lying there, full of dormant potential, that glorious language ready to ooze from his lips, if he’d only just wake up, was almost too much to bear after what seemed a lifetime of action.

Draco sighed. “Potter....” He felt strange now, thinking of Potter hissing to him, not threateningly, but with promises of more — in between the hissing — of Potter’s mouth on Draco’s sensitive lips, his chest, his cock.

Draco was instantly hard, visions of them lying together flitting across his mind’s eye, tasting each other on their tongues, burying their fingers in each other’s hair, hands and mouths wrapped around each other’s flesh… This time gentle, though, savouring, not frantic — not like scratching an itch, as sex with Blaise had been.

Having unlimited time to examine Potter so closely was a stolen treat. Potter was...sensual innocence, Draco decided — masterful in tone, yet chaste in body. Draco wondered if that’s what attracted him. Underneath their hostility and the vitriolic exchanges, there was a gravitation toward one another, like magnets, grabbing hold, coming together, completing the other.

“Gods, I want you…” Draco moaned and then came.

His shoulder ached from the movement on his injured collarbone. He ignored the pain, riding the waves of pleasure until they subsided. Behind his eyelids, he saw what he wanted — Potter, vibrant, his weight heavy upon Draco’s frame, his voice hissing liquid silk in Draco’s ear.

Draco looked across to the unconscious figure. So that was what it was, the ever-present feeling had a name now, but not one he’d dare speak. “Potter,” he panted. “What would I do without you?”

He fell asleep to the sound of Potter’s even breathing.

*


SSSsssssssssthhhhhhssaaaaaa, Draco....

Someone had said his name. He’d been having the most delicious dream, of warm lips against his ear, a hand holding his, when someone had said his name.

SSSSsssssstttthhhssssssthsssaaaa... The hand in his closed gently but firmly, and for one panicked moment, Draco thought he was being constricted by some sort of serpent. He blinked, almost certain he was dreaming. He squeezed his hand experimentally and the warm lips moved against his ear again. “SSSsssssssssaaaaaththhhhhsssssis this what you wanted?”

Draco’s eyes flew open as he felt another hand slide inside his pyjamas. How had it been under his blanket without him noticing? “Potter?” he squeaked, as the hand found flesh.

“Move over,” said the voice in the darkness. Potter’s voice.

Draco, mindful of his injuries, but startled beyond belief by this turn of events, shifted across the narrow bed to allow the other boy to lie next to him. The hand in his shifted to grab his wrist, as the other hand began slowly — achingly slowly — to stroke him.

“Potter, when did you—?” Draco began. Grey eyes searched out green ones in the darkness, seeing nothing but a messy head of dark hair as it bent toward him.

“Sssshhhhhh...” whispered Potter into Draco’s ear. Draco felt those lips against his throat now, and the hand on his cock sped up its rhythm. Draco arched his back and spread his legs, and Potter settled between them, covering half of Draco’s body in the process. Effectively trapped, Draco nearly came right then and there. Through sheer willpower, he forced himself to hold off, part of him sure he was still dreaming. He squirmed, which just made Potter tighten his grip on both wrist and cock.

“Ttthhhaaassssstttthhhhh....” Potter said, punctuating the sibilant phrase with a kiss to Draco’s unbroken clavicle.

“Gods...” Draco moaned into the mouth that covered his a moment later. He rocked backwards and forwards as his tongue twined around the one that pushed past his teeth. His free hand found its way to the body above and he grasped a handful of Potter’s pyjama-clad bum.

Now it was Potter’s turn to moan — and that was Draco’s undoing. He shook Potter’s hand from his wrist, and as he reached down to squeeze Potter’s arse with both hands, Draco’s cock spurted semen all over Potter’s fist.

“Ssssssssoo goooood.” The words, in English, were drawn out, long and low. Draco lost himself in the bliss of fulfilment.

When Draco became aware of himself again, he felt warm stickiness inside his flannel pyjamas and a hard cock rubbing along his thigh. He unconsciously raised his knee slightly, giving Potter more purchase. Having let go of Draco’s cock, Potter’s other hand now pressed into the mattress, raising himself up over the other boy. This image, had he not just come, would have had Draco well over the edge again.

Draco slid his hands into Potter’s pyjamas, sinking his fingers into flesh. He looked up just in time to see green eyes boring into his as Potter panted into his face. Then they squeezed closed as Potter’s knees gripped Draco’s leg.

A dark head fell into the crook of Draco’s uninjured shoulder and Potter’s weight pressed in on him. But it was only for a moment; Potter pulled away, leaving Draco to stretch out his leg, now covered in rapidly cooling semen.

Potter kissed him again, quickly, almost shyly, lifted himself off Draco, and climbed back into his own bed. He turned onto his side and looked at Draco with veiled eyes.

They stayed this way for a long time.

“What were you saying?” Draco finally asked him quietly, as if speaking too loudly might send Potter back to unconsciousness.

“Hmmm...” said Potter with a satisfied smile on his face. “I’ll tell you tomorrow.”

Draco looked over his shoulder to see if Madam Pomfrey was anywhere nearby. She usually left them to rest overnight, but once the nurse discovered Harry had recovered, there’d be few opportunities for this kind of thing until they were out of the Hospital Wing.

Draco sat up and perched on the side of his bed before getting up and hobbling the two steps it took to reach Potter’s bed. He unceremoniously pulled the blanket back and slid beneath it, feeling Potter shift sideways, then mould himself against Draco’s body. Draco nuzzled Potter’s neck, his mouth working up to an ear. He breathed into it. “Keep talking.”

The End

The sequel is Pillow Talk.

[identity profile] lolafalola.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
OH what that tongue could do! All that wonderful hissing and flicking. Yummy!

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
I could listen to him read out the football scores all day, honestly. *shivers*

Grammar: I knows it.
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[identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:52 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmmm, yummy!

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I love a little PT in the morning. And night. And afternoon. Well, you get the idea...

[identity profile] treacle-tartlet.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
*whimper*

Oh, dear god, naughty boys up to no good in the hospital wing...with parseltongue...guh...

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:25 am (UTC)(link)
Well, you know me... In fact, I think you know me too well! Thank you, sweetheart!

[identity profile] silenceberry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, my, now I wouldn't mind if Harry talk to me in parseltongue. This was really hot and so good.

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! Icon ♥.

Thank you for reading. I think the whole of the next film should just be in PT with subtitles!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
Nnnggghhh! What better place for smexxing than a room filled with beds. Mmm, lovely parselsmut, too. *g* Nice work, sweetie ♥

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:29 am (UTC)(link)
Indeed! I guess I'm a kinker nurse than I thought I was! Of course there are a few beds in the dorms, too. And I think the Great Hall's tables might qualify, and the seat cushions on the train, and Harry has one at home, and the Manor must have a bed or two...

Thanks for reading, sweetie. *hugs*

[identity profile] melusinahp.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:48 am (UTC)(link)
*nibbles you*

Argh, that was gorgeous. Just entirely delicious.

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:31 am (UTC)(link)
*Nibbles you back* Thanks for reading!

Am just about finished with yours - Harry tried to be a bit of a bastard and escape early, but I think I've talked some sense into him. These boys, eh?

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[identity profile] mindabbles.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm, very nice! Harry is a sneaky lad. :)

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
I love sneaky!Harry. He's about as subtle as a piano falling on you, so it's kinda nice when he lets himself be sneaky. Thank you for reading!

Was It Something I Said?

[identity profile] catsintheattic.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 06:50 am (UTC)(link)
Yummy fic!

Draco's thoughts about losing Harry had me laughing - they were so completely self-centred.

And parseltongue-smut in the hospital wing is such a hot item! *loves*

The ending was cute and cuddly. &hearts

Re: Was It Something I Said?

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:35 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! You're the first person to notice that! I had originally written his thoughts a bit differently and then realised I'd turned him into a Hufflepuff! Of course everything had to be about him, him, him.

And blame [livejournal.com profile] cassie_black12 for the cuddliness for sending me that picture of boys in flannel pjs I put up a few posts back. That was the inspiration for this :D
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[identity profile] naturegirlrocks.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
<3 ----------o~ (love snake)

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:37 am (UTC)(link)
*luffs YOU*

Thanks for reading, sweetie!

[identity profile] being-here.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Oooo - hot!

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:38 am (UTC)(link)
My favourite temperature.

Grrrr... ♥ and more ♥
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[identity profile] monster-o-love.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 08:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my, YESSSS!!!!! MMmmm, Draco's self-revelations are sooo sweet and I LOVE that Harry made all his sexy fantasies come true!!! Deliciousssss!!!! :D

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
I love ohnowhathaveIbecome!Draco. And even then he keeps denying things.

Harry's actually quite clever when he wants to be, but mainly I think he's just always in the right place at the right time. And we all know where that place is, hmmmm?

[identity profile] paddynmoon.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 10:00 am (UTC)(link)
Omg, that was so hot, I had no idea parseltongue could be so erotic O_O

Absolutely delicious :D

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 10:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for the nice comment! Oh, it's one of my bestest-favouritist kinks. I think it's because it's Harry being all smexy without even realising he is, that's part of the attraction. Not sure if I'd like hearing it out of anyone else...

Actually, that's a complete lie - a young Tom R does it for me too ;)
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[identity profile] leo-draconis.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
That was deliciously hot!

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, my love, but it doesn't hold a candle to anything by you in the hawt department! ♥
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[personal profile] tari_sue 2010-06-10 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
'Potter, I want you to talk snake" – I do so love selfish Draco :D

Lovely, hot fic, m'dear!

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
He just wants what I he wants. *ahem*

Thank you! ♥

[identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Yummy! Enjoyed this. :-)

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked my sssssilly little fic ♥ Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] veritas03.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yay! Parselsmut and snuggling! Yay you!!

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
It doesn't get much better than that for this fluffy fangirl! Thankssss for reading ♥
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Was It Something I Said?

[identity profile] joan-waterhouse.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:20 pm (UTC)(link)
It has been too long since I last read parselsmut! Far too long!
This was deliciously hot*. Oh, my! *fans self*

*I SWEAR I didn't copy leo's comment! I only realised it afterwards. Also, it's true - so no good changing it. ;)
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Re: Was It Something I Said?

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
It's been far too long since I wrote it! Thank you so much for the comment - I love hearing it over and over and over anyway :D

[identity profile] alovelycupoftea.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Delissssssssssssssh....

&hearts

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Sits down to eat eclairs with you today (and pizza with you tomorrow!) ♥

[identity profile] perpetualmarble.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
GUH! absolutely DELICIOUS! You fulfilled all my hopes with this amazing piece of kink. Parselsmutty-boy-love has never been so good! I loved the way you taunted us with Harry's OH-NO-COMA! in the beginning, never mind the fact that OF COURSE Harry couldn't remain comatose, Draco needs his hot lovin'! (As you can tell, I'm a little bit incoherent with love.) ;D

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Icon LUFF!!! I'm so glad you liked it! It came out a bit fluffier than I'd wanted it, but obviously Draco needed a moment of self-discovery and I needed to get the boys off wearing flannel jammies.

Thank you SSSSO much for the great prompt! It was a pleasure from start to finish ♥

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[identity profile] a-execution.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
mmmmmm...I've missed your yummy smut.

Also--best part of the fic was the last part, for me. Harry goes back on to bed and Draco follows him, in a move that was just so Draco. (I bet he'd love to be caught in the morning...)

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG!!! Now you've just put a plot bunny into my head!!!!! FOUND by Madam Pomfrey/Ron/Hermione/etc.

Oh, the ideas...

You're too good to me. ♥

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[identity profile] rickey-a.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
mmmmmm delicious

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, muchly! So was yours!

[identity profile] sra-danvers.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, I loved to hear Draco confessing these things to Harry in the darkness. How I love parseltongue! And two boys in the darkness of the nursery. *-*

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I do like that kind of bedroom confessional stuff. And yesss, snaky talk is a favourite of mine, too.

[identity profile] pink-mint.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this was such a treat!! Very sexy, darling. :-D

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Not quite "I the B", but it's got the talk :D Thank you so much for reading, sweety. And the wee pressie.

[personal profile] besamislabios 2010-06-10 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that was deliciously hot and the ending is so cute and sexy and adorable, hee! :-)

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Gracias, chica! I love grudgingly cuddly boys ♥

[identity profile] groolover.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*fans self* Just the thing to read before going to sleep. Sweet (and HOT) dreams ahead :-)

[identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com 2010-06-11 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, hope that gave you nicccccccccccccce dreams. ♥

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