That was sweet. I like the way they are both clumsy and awkward, even though Draco is acting tough - so cute, as was their first time.
You made them work so well, a little awkward and sweet and you just made me wish to see them holding their hands and cuddling with each other.
I'm not HP fan or Draco/Harry fan, but I like your stories and I'm going to read more of them.