Thanks doll! I really like writing an H/D relationship that's based on mutual lust and sarcasm. I don't know what it is, but the better they get along, the less hawt it seems to me. Nev and Ginny are the bomb, yeah? I think they're a great couple and make great fic fodder in this case.
Funnily enough, I had an entire 3-page scene where Draco and Hermione are having a conversation not long after the Transfig scene that was REALLY, REALLY good and the way he tells her is long and drawn out and incredibly cryptic until she has this "ooohhh" moment. She basically demands to know what's going on and afraid to be hexed by Ron, Draco finally tells her.
But my beta (rightly, dammit), told me to keep the POVs to Harry and Ron, so I kind of had to infer most of it, which made for a suckier (if more literary) scene :(
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Date: 2010-01-21 04:46 pm (UTC)Funnily enough, I had an entire 3-page scene where Draco and Hermione are having a conversation not long after the Transfig scene that was REALLY, REALLY good and the way he tells her is long and drawn out and incredibly cryptic until she has this "ooohhh" moment. She basically demands to know what's going on and afraid to be hexed by Ron, Draco finally tells her.
But my beta (rightly, dammit), told me to keep the POVs to Harry and Ron, so I kind of had to infer most of it, which made for a suckier (if more literary) scene :(