What an intensely passionate story... I like your versions of the Potter brothers. Sculptor!Albus is lovely, and I admire the tension you create in the early part of the fic with a situation where everyone expects AS/S to happen. And then - the seduction of James: love it, all giddy enthusiasm and such powerful affection for each other! Their first time is very hot indeed, with "never want to stop" and Albus promising James that it will get even better. That whole paragraph starting with "Sometimes he felt addicted." is such a gem, and the ending is most effectively bittersweet.

Very glad to have found this story. I haven't read much James/Albus so far, but your writing certainly makes me more interested in this ship and eager to find other fics. Thank you!