This is so lovely, and sad, and sexy. Poor James. Lily is brilliant. I am so glad that you asked me to read this. “I’m not drunk enough to kiss my brother, no matter how much I want to,” he whispered. “Yes, you are,” replied Albus. . I think my heart stopped for a moment. All of the characterisation was just perfect, and the dialogue's really natural. I think it's that which pulled me along and sucked me into this. It's dirty and doomed - just what I love about cest!
It was properly lovely to see you over the weekend.
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Date: 2011-03-28 12:36 am (UTC)“I’m not drunk enough to kiss my brother, no matter how much I want to,” he whispered.
“Yes, you are,” replied Albus. . I think my heart stopped for a moment.
All of the characterisation was just perfect, and the dialogue's really natural. I think it's that which pulled me along and sucked me into this.
It's dirty and doomed - just what I love about cest!
It was properly lovely to see you over the weekend.
You should definitely post this to