Ah, this was great! I started off feeling anxious an defensive for Harry's sake when Albus felt disgust at his own dad for being all over Scorpius and then Draco, and with Draco being hostile at first, but then the story developed and I really enjoyed how Draco warmed up to Harry. I especially loved this line: At the same time, Draco felt a surge of affection flow towards him, just as he felt it flow from him back to Harry. My satisfaction was sealed when we find out that Draco's always had an attraction XD
And I'm sure others will have commented on this, but THIS: "...his face had all the hallmarks of the I really, really want thatlook Draco imagined he himself got whenever he fantasised about showering with most of Puddlemere United."
That line is definately, definately in my list of Top Five Awesome Lines in H/D Fanfiction XD
no subject
Ah, this was great! I started off feeling anxious an defensive for Harry's sake when Albus felt disgust at his own dad for being all over Scorpius and then Draco, and with Draco being hostile at first, but then the story developed and I really enjoyed how Draco warmed up to Harry. I especially loved this line: At the same time, Draco felt a surge of affection flow towards him, just as he felt it flow from him back to Harry. My satisfaction was sealed when we find out that Draco's always had an attraction XD
And I'm sure others will have commented on this, but THIS: "...his face had all the hallmarks of the I really, really want thatlook Draco imagined he himself got whenever he fantasised about showering with most of Puddlemere United."
That line is definately, definately in my list of Top Five Awesome Lines in H/D Fanfiction XD